Looks good, except if I'm reading it right, the drawing should show the neck N and S in the same orientation as the bridge. the coil IDs on the left-hand side of the page has them flipped in relation to the bridge. Is that intentional?
edit: I'm not sure if you know this or not, but pay close attention to the pickup manufacturer's wiring diagram to get phasing and polarity right. There's no standard on what the colors mean. Each brand is different.